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Thursday, February 23, 2017

Ouch

My story is and ouch one look down below to read it!

My story!

Ouch

When I was 7 I went to the safari. A lion had come and scratched me, then bit me! After an hour ten lions came (and started eating my arm) I was asleep though then I woke up and saw them eating my arm. My arm was weak I felt useless until I punched them and it did nothing. I faked death I knew they would take me with them and they did.They took me with them by dragging me on the burning sand by the sleeve.OW! Lucky it was a nightmare!... When I woke thinking I was in the safari, with an eaten arm. I was scared. Thank goodness I was in bed at home. I picked up my rainbow leopard bunny named Cuddles and fell back to sleep. I’m lucky I had no more nightmares!

I was scared when it happend.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Safiyya Ashrita here! I like how you described your story it was really nice to read!

    I really like the part where you said dragging me on the burning sand by the sleeve. I wonder was it actually a nightmare or a regular dream?

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  2. Hey TJ here I loved it how it went it was so good I talled my mum about it great goob on it I. Hope you have a good day at school keep it up bye TJ out.

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  3. Hi TJ thanks.
    It was very fun to write.

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