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Thursday, August 17, 2017

My writing!

Today I'll show you progress from term one to term three!


Term one:

This one isn't go great because it didn't have much description and punctuation!





Dear Violet


Please don’t put the blame on me I have nothing to do with it I had no clue that it happened! All I know is that my Nana threw a toy box in the trash, I had no clue you were in it! And no I’d never replace you I have 2  new teddy's well actually a few! One is Cuddles and one Is Cotton and the rest are bears. Cuddles and Cotton are bunnies Cotton is tiny well small cuddles is big you must not be ripped! No way you are broken! Please tell me you're in my toy box at home!

From: Your sorry friend Safiyya
Term 3:

This one is better because it has more punctuation!

Winter Acrostic Poem!

Kia ora I am sharing one of my winter poems with you!
Please enjoy it!


If you can sing it! The fire with the x over it means not more summer and the winter stuff means it's winter!

Blog ya later!