This one isn't go great because it didn't have much description and punctuation!
Dear Violet
Please don’t put the blame on me I have nothing to do with it I had no clue that it happened! All I know is that my Nana threw a toy box in the trash, I had no clue you were in it! And no I’d never replace you I have 2 new teddy's well actually a few! One is Cuddles and one Is Cotton and the rest are bears. Cuddles and Cotton are bunnies Cotton is tiny well small cuddles is big you must not be ripped! No way you are broken! Please tell me you're in my toy box at home!
From: Your sorry friend Safiyya
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This one is better because it has more punctuation!
Kia ora Safiyya
ReplyDeleteI think both of these pieces of writing are quite good. The first one has good punctuation too. Maybe next time when you are comparing writing samples, make sure a difference can be seen.
Ok Miss Waho next time I'll make sure you can see the difference.
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